It depends on how noble the pharaoh is... Or rather, what drives his nobility. If he cared more for his land, he would be apt to "go out with a bang"; do something for his people, work a treaty, kill an angry hippo.. If he cared more for his dynasty, he would try again for a son no matter the cost (think Henry VIII and his six wives).

As per my thoughts on the book, it sounds like you're putting in some elements that make for a good write and an interesting read; but, like I mentioned in my other post, you need to think about the audience. The average person might not catch some historical innacuracies (cancer is a big one. There is no possible way the ancient Egyptians knew anything of it!!). If you want to target an audience who knows the subject, then you might want to make it a little more realistic. That is, unless this is your deliberate purpose, which is perfectly fine anyways. I see it like a video game. I love realistic games with unrealistic elements, like a shooter with lasers.

it's not cancer just something of that sort it can't be cured was what i was meaning by that. but no there is no cancer as for the audiance well it really is a whoever when ever title. for any one who walks in to books a million and buys it just as long as they under stand the plot. but i gusse because it goese so deep into despairis affairs it would probaly be better for a more matuer adiuance not haven to know a lot about egypt.
O crap. my cat is playing with a snake! oh and i almost forgot egyptian godess go ahead my family wont tell me how it sounds so i'm all ears which is just two. i'm coming kitty!

aaww how cute.. was it hurt?! i love kitties! i have 4 kittens now! well it sounds really good! not alot of information but u can't let too much loose. i like the he had a chile but died bit... maybe he can marry another and have her child! i dunno but it sounds good!

no my cat is fine. with his big body he could probaly crush that snake any ways it was just a little snake a little green one which vanised into the ground thanks for the concern

Your story sounds good. I'm a writer too, but I don't write about AE. I wish I could, but that's just not my style. I write more present-day realistic fiction... but I love reading about AE.

Every disease has a cure , that is my opinion